This isn't bad for a second effort at a ride. I felt like you had a reasonable idea of good shaping and generally the forces stayed within acceptable limits. A lot of the airtime hills provided good forces which made the ride enjoyable. I didn't understand why you didn't use the full height of the coaster however, the whole ride sitting so high above the terrain felt rather wasted. You ride also felt very "straight". The best rides use different angles of turns to manouver around itself, however yours consisted of 180 degree turns which was a bit dull and predictable.
Keep on creating and feel free to pm me about your rate [: