The ride layout is pretty good. I like the addition of the terrain and trees/bushes. It feels like it could be a real coaster.
A lot of the negative G-forces are too high, therefore this ride will probably be a bit painful. The ride would be a lot better if it went a bit slower so that the G-forces wouldn't be that extreme.
Halfway through the ride there is a fire effect that seems to appear out of nowhere. I like the original idea but, I think you can easily make it look a bit better by placing a round support at the spot of the fire. That way it would look like the fire came out of a pipe instead of just appearing close to the grass.
The part after the brakes is a bit of an anticlimax after the very fast ride but it's still better than just slowly driving straight to the station.
The negative G's were far too high, which would have resulted in a painful ride, some of the positives were a tad on the high side too as the wood would soon warp under those forces.
What really needed improving was the lack of lateral forces, the whole ride felt as if you'd used the "0 Lateral G's" button and it really killed it. Lateral G's are awesome on woodies, and many are designed around them for good reason.
I thought the pacing was good though and the dive into the tunnel was a really fun section.