Aero Star

Sehr nice, der Coaster!

Technique
Trackwork - I liked the style of your trackwork - it felt really "travelling ride" style and I think you made a really good effort at at Schwarzkopf style ride. The first section of the ride was certainly reminiscent of rides like Olympia Looping and Looping Star.

You did need to work on several areas however. There were bumps throughout the ride, especially on a couple of the pull ups. The S curve also need tweaking to the shaping - the banking was certainly off and I think you perhaps need a little more lead out/in to help the ride flow properly through that section. Also your lift hill finished way before the crest of the hill. This needs to finish at the horizontal point for this kind of ride (note that other rides often have it finish over the crest!). You also had a clearance test fail at the end of the ride and it also failed the e-stop (make sure that trim brakes are set to trim not block!)

Supports - Supports were pretty decent. I think you did a good job of ensuring the entire ride was just about adequately supported - I felt you could have improved the supports on the corkscrew as it felt a little flimsy there. You had a good go at doing custom supports though so good credit for that!

Scenery - Thought the scenery effort was pretty good - I enjoyed the whole travelling fair aspect (although I'm aware not all the 3DS were yours) you put what you had together well. There were some tweaks to the station required such as the handrail not being on the staircase and some perfected to be done (such as fencing off the ride area). It was a nice effort though!

Adrenaline
Pacing / Layout - The ride layout provided the ride with some decent thrills - the double loop was cool and you did keep it varied and fairly pacey. The long trains did impact the pacing through the loops which felt a bit weird however - the ride also felt a little bit too short for my tastes - especially being a travelling ride.

Forces - The trackwork meant some of your laterals we're a bit extreme and a tad uncomfortable however they were arguably acceptable for the most part. You did have some nice positive forces here and there. I think shorter trains would've helped you greatly.

Uniqueness
Layout / Elements - The layout was fairly typical of a travelling ride although the corkscrew was a nice addition. Really everything needed executing better to really let your ideas come through.

Scenery - Marks for this - I haven't seen someone attempt the whole travelling fair style thing as a whole area really. I'd have loved to see you expand this with some more flat rides and proper fencing everywhere.

Other Realism Notes

I'd have argued that you needed a metal base structure just to really show this off as a travelling ride. Otherwise the vibe of the ride felt realistic and I enjoyed that.

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Sehr Realistischer Coaster aber irgentwie ist mir dieser Coaster zu normal der k??????nnte auch auf ner Kirmes stehen