ok let's go into this deeper
..:: Originality ::..
( 1 / 2 ) : Did include new elements or not too seen elemenths ? : Just the vertical drops
( 1.5 / 2 ) : What about the combinations of elements ? Are original ? : Kind of them yes, but not too original.
( 0.75 / 2 ) : Improve new supports ?: NO, not edited supports, you havent spend time whit the supports
( 1 / 2 ) : Have some really special and amazing thing ? : Drop a little
( 1.5 / 2 ) : Personal opinion : The track have some things original, but not too; layout could be more original and mix some up nd down turns
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BONUS POINTS
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( 0 / 0.5 ) : Have 3DS // Env ? : No
( 0 / 0.5 ) : Really worked supports : No
( 0.25 / 0.5 ) : Terraformer : Have, but is not smooth, and must be lower hight
( 0 / 0.5 ) : Cartextures :
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see, 3ds goes into bonus points. It is not a set standard for the entire track. terraforming also earned you extra points. did not affect against your overall rate, rather boosted it up a notch over the basic grade. Now, if you feel otherwise, I can go ahead and subtract the bonus points you got overall which is a total of .25
let's gop to the technical
..:: Technical ::..
( 0.5 / 1 ) : First Drop : Can't be 90????????? , but is fantasy...
( 0.75 / 1 ) : Combination of inversions // elements : They're good, too repetitive at some sites, but they're good
( 0.75 / 2 ) : Is the track Smooth ? : Have serius problems whit banking, and some bumps
( 0.75 / 1 ) : G Forces: RED // YELLOW // GREEN : Overall green
( 0.5 / 1 ) : Build of some supports : Autosupport, and BAD at the main drop, you haven't deleted these crap support.
( 0.75 / 2 ) : Errors founded : Can't be 90????????? drop, bumps, hard-turns, layout repetitive at some parts, the speed of the chain is too , the second airtime , too inclinated too, supports get into the terrain
( 1 / 2 ) : Personal Opinion : Was ok, but you can work harded, and spend more time in editing supports and making it smooth and better.
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Final: ( 5 / 10 )
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says it can't be 90 dgrees, but it's fantasy so I assume he did not dock you entirely had it been realistic., combo of elements etc, says was good but got rather repetative, going on he points out you had problems with banking and with bumps, otherwise the ride would jerk around a bit and banking problems occured in the transitions. They were not smooth enough and the banking was not enough or was too much. later he says hard turns, that means you went too fast into your turns thus raising your g's count suddenly. Stated in final that you need to edit the supports, mentioned for the drop abd making it smoother and less repetative. Seems pretty clear to me what he meant there.
..:: Adrenaline ::..
( 1 / 2 ) : First Drop ? : Not hight, dont like the braking at the edge... it make too slow
( 1 / 1 ) : Did the terraformer // trees make more adrenaline ? : Yeah, a lot
( 2.5 / 3 ) : Are the inversions and the layout interesant or boring ? : Overall was really good, have some slow parts, but is amazing
( 0.5 / 1 ) : Have some spectacular events ? : Hmmmmm no , just too vertical drops
( 0.75 / 1 ) : Airtime : Was medium-hight
( 1.75 / 2 ) : Personal opinion : The adrenaline was really hight.... too slow at teh begining and at the helix, but overall was good. THe vertical drop i think whitout the brake at the edge it will look better and special.
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Final: ( 7.5 / 10 )
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he wasn't adrenalized by your first drop, felt it was too slow for HIS taste. he congratulated you for adding adrenaline with the trees, something that is rare for people to do. stated there was no spectacular sparts besides the two drops. states the ride overall was good, didn't state it was superb or excellent, just "good" which good reads out in my mind slightly above average. states that the airtime achieved was of medium time, meaning that on average, these types of coasters have more air time than what you provided in yours. in general he states that you lacked speed speed at the start of the rid eand in the helix and tips you that the vertical drop without the brake would be better without the brake. That's his opinion. Yes he does it on his rides, but that doesn't mean that because he likes it on B&M sit down coasters that he'll also enjoy it on other type of coasters.
Final personal opinion:
Coaster looks nice, but have TOO UNREALISTIC things (Yes , is fantasy, but come on! make it more "realistic") . Also, you can smoot hmore the track, have really hard turns. The layout was nice, and the 4 hills looks really really good . Spend more tiem whit supports, you haven't deleted the vertical drop supports, and it looks crap. Supports go into the terraint too, try to make the cement base after make Terraformer, OVerall was good, but you could work really more hard.
he acknowledges it is a fantasy ride, but states that it could been more realistic had you provided more work into it. states track needs more smoothing, says your hills "look" good, not necessarily ride good. and that you were negligeable in deleting the supports that should have been deleted. says overall was good and that you should work harder with an overall rate of: 6.17 which is above average.
this seems to be rather explained well and justified well I just took 30 min more to go over it. I assume it took him even longer as he started it out blank. It seems like he knows what he is talking about and talks about specific problems that should be addressed by the builder. pointed out both bad and good things about your ride and grade you in segments and by that you can see how much more work you can do to improve those parts. Also he gave you a bonus on terraforming and did not deduct for no 3ds files, you just didn't earn any extra points. count it up, here I'll show you:
( 1 / 2 ) : Did include new elements or not too seen elemenths ? :
( 1.5 / 2 ) : What about the combinations of elements ? Are original ? :
( 0.75 / 2 ) : Improve new supports ?:
1 / 2 ) : Have some really special and amazing thing ? :
( 1.5 / 2 ) : Personal opinion :
add that and you get 5.75 points out of 10 points
in the bonus points section you can earn up to 2 bonus points, but you only got .25 out of it this making your overall score for originality of 6 points out of 10.
Is this all clear or still need better explanation?