Help editing Tutorial

I need a favor. I have been working on a modeling tutorial for 3D Modeling, specifically for Scream Machines. This is not a tutorial on using the Object Editor. This is a tutorial on actually modeling for Scream Machines, from the first vertex to the last texture, all the way to having it run in SM.

Part 1 is modeling a train (Part 2 will be a station and so on... and so on...)

Currently, I am almost done with chapters 3 and 4 of the train tutorial (of 8 chapters). Before getting too far along I would like a few people to read over it and edit it. You can also make comments on the format, screenshots, layout, readability.... you get the idea.

Please email me at dave@torch511.com if you are interested in helping me out. I will only be sending a 3/4 complete Introduction and a full Chapter 1 (12 pages total) so this is not the full tutorial by any means, but will give me enough feedback. I have 2 friends (1 teacher, one computer guru) that will be doing the final editing, because I do not want the tutorial passed around before an entire part is done. I will say that I will be putting out Part 1 as soon as it is complete, and Part 2 will come when it is done (and so on). I figure about 2 more weeks for part one to be released, along with the V2 drop trains.