^... not only did you spell the word wrong, its spelled hypocrites, but you also used the word completely wrong.
the definition is - a person who professes beliefs and opinions that he does not hold.
Now how do they fall into that catagory?
Anyways, about the trip report, spend more time describing details of the ride, instead of just what you did. SO that way, we know about how fun the ride is, so that way, us reader's will be able to understand in more depth how great the park really is. Also, better spelling would make the report easier to understand