Corkscrew recreation

yea u read it im doing a recreation of Corckscrew at Cedar Point the second mondren coaster to feature a vertical loop. here are some screens on the project please dont yell at me if im doing a crapy job im still kinda a beginner this is my first coaster with scenrey and with custom supports

Umm... well... it's not enough to judge yet... but I wish you luck.

Oh it's enough to judge...

Yeah, looks good so far, you need to make the drop wider.

[jayman]

Originally posted by SFMM homie

Oh it's enough to judge...

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ok i put more scenrey i got the drop finished i got the air time hill with supports finished yes i know the path scenrey is still messed up im still working on it

sorry about double post i got loop done with some other things done here are some pics

Notes (IMO):

The trashcan should be about 1.5-2 times smaller than it is.

The leadout of the second corkscrew should probably have more banking.

The leadout of the brakes and lift hill should have more of a curve to it instead of nearly straight segments.

Maybe the first drop should be a little less steep (because of its size).

Because of its size, I think the ride should be somewhat smaller. Does it crawl through those corkscrews?

The first corkscrew looks fine, but maybe the second should be smaller instead of being stretched out.

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This was based off Corkscrew at CP right, because the layout looks pretty much the same.

yea its based off of corkscrew at cp

The height seems to be pretty off, as well as angle and shaping. Everything looks like some block from the sky landed on it. (As in everything looks kind of distorted vertically) Also, some transitions are too sharp and some distances between track seems to be a bit off. Some pictures from rcdb may help, but there's not many of them there, but here they are:

http://rcdb.com/ig13.htm

Some from cedarpoint.com:

http://www.cedarpoint.com/public/park/r ... /index.cfm

You might want to have a look for more pictures, and if you visit the park, have a look there too. Try to make the track shaping more accurate and with less sudden bends; smooth it out.

Not looking incredible yet...

ok thanks for the help how to make it better ill try what u guys been saying

guys im sorry but i think im going to stop the project for right now i got to much stuff going on in my life there is alot of work for touch up's i realy just dont have the time to make it im very sorry for stoping i might start it back up later on