Ra!

I would like if people stopped by and rated my track, Its my first track using newton, its a wooden gci. I would like comments because i'm trying to get better with newton and tips would be good also on stuff I need to improve on! Link to track is http://coastercrazy.com/track_exchange/ ... ?tid=17627

I can't tell you what's wrong, I don't have 12 hours, but I'll give you a job:

get a reference picture of a gci and get a screenshot of a section of your ride that looks like it. If you can't get a decent match, you did a really poor job. In summary, you did a really poor job. Look at the rides and I beg of you to make an attempt to get the shaping right.

I can't give you tips except to think really hard about what you are making and concentrate on realism.