There are a lot of issues:
-The drop out of the station is much more abrupt and not so stretched out.
-The turn before the lift should be at -2*
-There should be a straight section with a trim brake before the lift.
-The lift should be at 35* and only has catwalks on the left side.
-The first drop and camel back is wrong. The ride should be 78ft high, drop at a 45* angle to 35ft above the ground. Then camelback up about 15ft then drop again to 8ft above the ground.
-The hill after the loop should be much taller. The train should pass over the hill around 10-15(tops)mph. Then drop into the "heartline"
-The turn should go directly into the corkscrews. Yours has almost a straight section (tilted).
-The turn after the corkscrews starts like it's going into another corkscrew. Then the left banked turn is 'flat' or with the trim section.
-Corkscrew doesn't have any transfer wheels. The brake section should be at -2*. Then the transfer section and station should be at -3*.
-The Transfer section is closer to the station.