Eh dive loops/immelmans are really really tricky to get right, so I'd call it close enough. Looks interesting so far, and my retinas are definitely burned lol.
As I think we discussed before the rollback the g's are fine so I wouldn't worry too much- but it could probably do with being banked a little bit earlier!
^^ This may be a bit off this topic, but this photo really tells us that riders with stretched arms and legs are in a great joy! I adore this well-shot angle, thanks!