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The William Forsythe Massacre

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Post November 13th, 2005, 6:18 pm

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Lmao, I couldn't help but laugh when I wrote the Subject title.

You're probably confused, but it's the name of my short story I'm writiing for our school's writer book thingy. It had a few requirements to fulfull, and one of them was extrememly stupid.
"Your lead character must transform into someone else."
?! So I decided to be stupid and he turns into William Forsythe (Sheriff Wydell, Devil's Rejects).

It's a hack/slasher not-really-horror story about a man (Roland) who is involved in a local massacre supposively run by "William". He starts to envision a mysterious murderer that tells Roland that he (Rolland) will become the mysterious man. Roland does and goes on a run down to get this "William" dude.

It's full of sadistic violence and symbolism and crap, and if any of you guys are interested, I'll send you the raw copy (un-edited). If you want, you can help me out with small stuff, but you really don't have to, at all. I'm serious. I could send you the guidelines if you want. But this is just for kicks, so e-mail me or PM me your e-mail adress if you want it.

E-mail: w00tism@hotmail.com

Edit: I think I made it sound sorta stupid, but IMO it's slow action and sorta interesting.
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Post November 13th, 2005, 6:30 pm

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Ermm...no.

It's open to the school, 9th grade and up. It really isn't that sophisticated...the guidelines are kind of crude and simple enough for a 5th grader, but I guess they decided to let everyone in high school do it.

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You should make him kill someone with a toothpick.

Post November 13th, 2005, 7:52 pm

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Originally posted by Coasterkidmwm

You should make him kill someone with a toothpick.


Lmao, nah. I'll tell you what weapons he uses. An axe, a broken axe stub, a gun, another axe, and a buzz saw. Plus, I'm already pissed about the quidelines, it kind of distorted the realism of my story (if there was any).

And you stole my avatar! Lol.

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Post November 13th, 2005, 10:34 pm

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Crap! First things first, the story isn't about William Forsythe! It has two characters he plays in it as sort of an illusion. We were required to make an allusion to a character and a scene from a movie, so I just slipped in two. The subject was as a joke. The story is called "The William Massacre" anyway. And it really isn't all that violent.

That, and I spelt guidelines wrong.

Still, the thing is done, and if anyone wants to read it, send me an e-mail.[;)]

And there isn't a lot of killing. It's more of a hunt. And he doesn't kill the people with one of those items to tell you the truth.


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