Well I made you listen to a 6 minute youtube link yesterday and you said the people I linked to had good stage presence so I'll give this a "review".
It made me feel uneasy (hopefully that was the intent) but I feel like the intro was a bit too long.
I do like what you did with the snare drum and background aside from the static in general though it's just not my thing.
"Careful man, there's a beverage here!"